Moar Dohvabear, please! :3
Lovely, just lovely...
Well...at last this guy have found a girl)) I hope this love story will got the continuation. =)
5/5 10/10 +fav +my respect
And one more thing... Prodolzhai v tom zhe duhe, kamrad! Rossiya gorditsya toboj! ^__^
Otlichnaya vesch', vprochem kak i ostal'nye)) Prodolzhai nas radovat' svoimi rabotami))
Truly beatiful and relaxing game...
5/5 10/10 +fav
Nice, funny and interesting game)))
It's... It's so beautiful... I don't even have a proper words to describe it... Truly RESPECT for you, man...
5/5 10/10 + ETERNAL fav
Nice work, dude)
Okay, let's start. That single sound in the beginning... It doesn't fit to the after melody. Choir have too weak sound. Trumpet is too low and sharp. It reminds me the sounds from the Nintendo game... Make some reverb and sound diffusing. Drums are weak too, the guitar is overpowering it. I recommend you to make drums more powerful. About the tempo, of course. I think guitar is a little slower than it must be. And the last thing... A whole track is kind a "hollow", add more instruments to it, some bassline and additional sound lines will help.
I hope all this speech doesn't offend you. It's still not bad music. Guitar sounds very well and alive. If you'll change the enhancement to the same level that can become a really good track. Good luck! =)
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lol I honestly havent the slightest idea where that sound came from.
lol theres really nothing I can do about the weak ass trumpet lol
Hmm about the hollow sound Im not so sure what to do about it. Maybe I'll come back and work on it later.
But thanks for the helpful review!
Nice and innocent...
Really good track, man... Simple, kind, bright and tender. You've earned my respect.
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