Nice work, dude)
Okay, let's start. That single sound in the beginning... It doesn't fit to the after melody. Choir have too weak sound. Trumpet is too low and sharp. It reminds me the sounds from the Nintendo game... Make some reverb and sound diffusing. Drums are weak too, the guitar is overpowering it. I recommend you to make drums more powerful. About the tempo, of course. I think guitar is a little slower than it must be. And the last thing... A whole track is kind a "hollow", add more instruments to it, some bassline and additional sound lines will help.
I hope all this speech doesn't offend you. It's still not bad music. Guitar sounds very well and alive. If you'll change the enhancement to the same level that can become a really good track. Good luck! =)
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lol I honestly havent the slightest idea where that sound came from.
lol theres really nothing I can do about the weak ass trumpet lol
Hmm about the hollow sound Im not so sure what to do about it. Maybe I'll come back and work on it later.
But thanks for the helpful review!
Nice and innocent...
Really good track, man... Simple, kind, bright and tender. You've earned my respect.
5/5 10/10 +fav
Cool track, man...relaxing and positive))) Summer walk in the night city... Streetlights, cars, peoples, shining moon... I like that)))
Good, but it can be better...
I'm glad I have a part in this giant work... Track is good, very good. But gaps and breakups are annnoying...A faded transitions between the parts can improve the sound. And of course the placement must be changed: fast and heavy part, then neutral part, then calm part. That kind of classification will be good.
Nice track, man))) But I'm agree with sdfmusic - the choir needs effects. The instruments can be a little softer and calm. A little more experiments with the sound, maybe...
Softer, calmer... sounds nice. Although this is supposed to bring a lot more out of the melody and everything. Have you heard the OST? It's so empty sometimes I'd call it experimental something... I guess contrast is what this mix is about. Oh well, I'll definitely work on sound!
Thanks for the review!
It's so beautiful track, man... I'm really RESPECT you for this work...
Thanks, mate ;)
I appreciate it
Man, that's really great remix... RESPECT! \\^_^//
Chillout is all about...
Man, that's really cool track. Slow, gentle and kind... Summer night in the jazz club...
Faith on the Edge....
Man...that's real masterpiece... No more words, only pure delight...
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