Hmmm...
Okay, let's start. That single sound in the beginning... It doesn't fit to the after melody. Choir have too weak sound. Trumpet is too low and sharp. It reminds me the sounds from the Nintendo game... Make some reverb and sound diffusing. Drums are weak too, the guitar is overpowering it. I recommend you to make drums more powerful. About the tempo, of course. I think guitar is a little slower than it must be. And the last thing... A whole track is kind a "hollow", add more instruments to it, some bassline and additional sound lines will help.
I hope all this speech doesn't offend you. It's still not bad music. Guitar sounds very well and alive. If you'll change the enhancement to the same level that can become a really good track. Good luck! =)
-EvilScorpio-
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